This is an interesting story. I like the fact that the perspective changes with each chapter. It gave the story a unique feel.

This story is amazing like all of your works. I plan on finishing it and reviewing when I'm done but currently I must stop reading and just wanted to share with you my thoughts, which are these.

You guys rock, this story is kick ** and uhm... SM Productions sounds like you write kinky ** stories. That would be the funniest thing. xD

Got to lazy to review the rest of your awesome story... but it least I reviewed right? Anyway I liked how it ended so. And for like.. the 5th time, GOOD JOB!!

- Sanako-chan

Wow. Another action packed chapter. Wyatt finally realizes Otto's not who he seems. THANK GOD! I think it would have been kinda obvious but whatever.

Sanako-chan

Eep. A fire and a Tottly action packed chapter. Makes up for the last one.

Sanako-chan

So Margo's back. Good for her.

- Sanako-chan

Ha, this was a fun chapter. Otto and Wyatt screwed. They watched Eisen and the twins screw. Otto got drunk. And, finally, they made out in a mirror maze like thingie.

Otto and Eisen screwed before didn't they?

- Sanako-chan

The beginning of this chapter is cute. The end is... I dunno... sexy, interestingly three way, and oh my god is she being screwed by Munnin and Huginn ?!?!? Other than then that... Woot, good job.

- Sanako-chan

I like how you did this chapter in Wyatt's point of view. Clears up a bit of confusion I had about the last chapter. I'm still admiring your writing style. *loves*

- Sanako-chan

And so they meet.

Yay, Otto! (I like him... -.-)

- Sanako-chan

New character!!

I like Wyatt. I also happen to have a neighbor with the same name and they're nothing alike. It's sorta funny. >.<

Margo liking Wyatt is hilarious. He's GAY for crying out loud! ... This only excites me to see if she's ever find out... and how she'll respond to this little bit of information. *evil cackling*

Great job.

- Sanako-chan

I don't like Loki. He seems like an **. But I like Wil. He's pretty cute. :D

Most Quote at you...

1.“Would you?”

“Would I what?” Marry you?

“Tell me a story.”

Remarks- That was cute... IT WAS! -.-

2.“Your problem, Otto, is that you aren’t anything. I’ve never seen you lay a finger on a girl, and that makes us wonder. But then, you’ve never laid a finger on a guy, either. Now, I don’t know, or want to know, what you picture when you’re yanking your prick at night, and really, that’s exclusively your business. All I’m saying is that if you find you like what this guy has to offer, remember your loyalties. I’ve seen lust mess up a lot of fine people.”

Remarks2- This made me laugh: 'yanking your prick at night' Why? I have no idea.

-Sanako-chan

It still astounds me that you have less then 20 reviews. This story deserves at least 100. I'm going to have to pimp it at my sister. I just hope that if she reads it, she'll actually review it. -.-

Eisen seems like a very... interesting character. I think its cool that she lives in a warehouse and for a living she's a **. And apparently not ashamed of it.

- Sanako-chan

Wonderful first chapter! Your writing style is unique and fun to read. I have a feeling I'm going to enjoy this Story.

Good job.

- Sanako-chan

mou. so what's going to happen? quickly now, UPDATE!