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| White is a Sin 2006-02-10 ch 1,  | abusethat was good but it still made me laugh! ^_^ |
| TheatricalHorror 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuseOH I like this poem! It is very good! How shall I put it...? Hm...well I can pretty much see an image in my head when I read it, it is quiet good! Good job! |
| Snowed-Under 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abuseCat! This... is... AWESOME! I love it! The first verse just drags you in. I wish I could write like this! |
| xxTigers Eyexx 2004-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is a great poem. I like this, obviously |
| MagzRL 2004-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good. I love the title and the imagery is wonderful. But, why are there those marks on the paragraphs? Anyway, good job, and thanx for reviewing! Magz. |
| AnotherFace 2004-07-02 ch 1, | abusewow..this powerful..I can really feel it |
| she's not breathing 2004-06-17 ch 1, | abusei loved the words in this, and the rhyme. and the symbols between each stanza kind of add to it. the only thing i'd change is the formatting. with poetry it's just usually better to have each little part on a separate line. =) nice, though. check out something i've written? ~k8 |