hey david...you are amazing! this is really touching and i really like it...never stop writing!

oh thats really cool you should make it into a real song! My favorite part is "The hope you drain.
Slightly dilutable.
It’s the hope that I would try.
The rope, I hang,
Tightly, as usual.
It’s the rope. I finally die."

Unfortunately for me this idiotic computer has no sound. So I can only read the lyrics. The lyrics are great, and I'm sure they are probably even better with the music. So, great job!

i like it, some bits for me personally dnt work but im no good at songs, thats ur speciality.
The english git Haz