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Work End
Voi Voi
2004-06-20 . chapter 1
I was not thinking that the last line would be like that, lol. I mean I still like it, but it wasn't what I was expecting!
Sang Yu Nung
2004-06-18 . chapter 1
I thought this was a nice poem, the second line was nice! And the ending was unexpected... well done, write on! ^^
sleepy-sentry
2004-06-18 . chapter 1
Nice haiku! How we all like work to end! I would recommend reading Work, a poem I wrote.
Great work!
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