wow, ya really know how to yank those emotions around!what a rollercoaster!and such an adorable ending!it made me laugh, cry, and go 'aww' this story...youre very good...i hope you'll write more soon... :)

wow! nice twist!you certainly have the raw emotions down to a T!i like it!

i love listening to bands play sometimes... especially the flute and piano... love them...and its just so TYPICAL how everything just goes WRONG just before a big thing!i had that with one of my drama things... some stupid idiot turned up on the last day and took my prop!ok, sorry, babbling...ONTO THE NEX CHAPTER!!

i reckon every girl in history has fallen in love with her best friend...

but, i have to admit, i have done that too...

i love this start! and i love the name Alex! always have...

so, where will THIS go? :)

wow i loved this that was great it was the best short story ever so a white horse eh

wow u did a really good job on that. keep up the good work. i'll ttyl. ~yourself

Heh, I knew that would come up eventually. update keep it up odie

Gawly, is bnd all you guys ever think about!!? lol I like your story maybe you could use more details though I dunno later

HEY! I am a nonband person & I don't hang out at parties and drink! Heck, I don't even go to parties. lol Story's good so far. You already have 21 reviews! I don't have that many! Of course, I'm better at writing fanfics (I've got 66 reviews!). And most of my fp.com stories are 1-shots. Go check them out; your story is up! ^_~

Cute, **managed to finnishing reading in between bouts of depresed Seto-ness** Wow the music I was listening to so didn't match this fic ((was listening to the slightly depressing Where Will You Go?)). Should've listened to the 'I'm Holding OutFor A Hero' song, it's actally got a line in there in the first verse somewhere, let me see...
Where have all the good men gone
And where are all the gods?
Where's the street-wise Hercules
To Fight the rising odds?
-ISN' THERE A WHITEKNIGHT
UPON A FIREY STEED?-
Late at ight i toss and turn
And dram of what I need...
IShn't it cool? We lurves it muchness, I'll have to burn you a copy for summer band camp.

Bah, momoko (roel) made me read **stabs him** I TOLD YOU I'M BUSY WITH BALLAD OF THE MISING AND WHERE WILL HE GO DAMNIT! OK I'm done with my rant, muaha the freshman were much fun to toy with this year, ya should've come. OMG! MY BROTHER'S LITTLE SISTER IS VICKI! Freakish, one of the biggest marchers out there has a little sibling that happens to be one of the littlest marchers out there 0o. Cosmic...
Anywho, might I be thinkin' this has somethin' to do with one of those realy twisted soap operaish moments in your most recent life? **wink, wink, nudge, nudge, really has no idea whats going on** Heh, you'd love the next song I got. It's called 'I'm Holding Out For a Hero' aesome, ne? Anyways, keep your eyes pealed on FF for when I toss Ballad of the Missing and Where Will He Go? (My joukai ygo fics =^..^=)

kerlan. haha. i love it. gosh this story was so great. got me tearing up. just like at 2 am. great story.

So I was Right! hahahahaha! Well, I have to admit that the ending to your story was very sweet. I think you have a lot of talent (just remember to expand your stories, both longer and deeper)! write another romance story soon

haha...u don't know how hard i'm laughing right now...i guess ur just like me...ya always gotta take a dare...lol...newayz...gr8 story...woulda never thought of that scenario...thanx 4 that at the very least...lol...still laughin...sorry..newayz...cant wait 4 another one, tho i no it prolly wont b 4 a while...lol...kech ya l8r chica...
*~Me~*

cute.
~Mel