*hums Twilight Zone theme* Just the way supernatural stories should be... well-seeming, with an eerie twist at the end. Very good.

Interesting.. it's got style. And also with a twist at the end.

Oh, devilish twist at the end there. Beautifully written. Very realistic. You make writing look like child's play, especially with all the imagery you created. Good job.
Happy Hunting,
MOONLITDEMON

wow! that is so intense and well written I could exactly imagine the way it must have seems with the rain and the imprint! well done!! for such a short story I am truly amazed!

Nice work, I loved the twist at the end. Good job, keep writing.
**Slave**