not your best, but well done... kinda like a scene from a movie

really good. i like how it works well as is, and yet is deeper than it seems. great job, i love ur stuff!

Amazing as always. I love how you intertwined rain with this, makes this all the more beautiful and powerful to read.

!* Noelle *!

very uplifint & inspirational

its too bad ur not in a band, cuz i think your lyrics are good. i liked this song thingy, good job.

yay!

Nice job

Meg

i like this one. it is nice how u use the clouds and shit. ugh the reviews r getting sloppy now...

oh i like this! The words you've used are really strong, it sorta shows the strength of the storm. Thanks for all ur reviews, i really apprieciate them :D

what nice and cool imagry! awesomeness man! ;)

whoa tom, you're deep. cool chorus

I really like the chorus & well the poem overall... it was really powerful and I liked it- good comparison of anger and the storm... I like the opening to, it reminds me of "Yaoke Mae" I think "Hitori de wa tooi ashita wo" (When i'm alone, tomorrow feels far away) - anyways thanks for the review, write on!

Oh. I like this! I love the metaphor too. Awesome song!
Hawke

Nice.
I really like the chorus.
The entire thing screams loneliness. The way you word it and the way you have things paragraphed somehow emphasize the words and meaning, giving them power. Great job Tom!
Magz.