 InnocentSinIncarnate 2005-09-23 . chapter 1Aw...such a sad story, but it's very good! As usual, wonderful job with the details and your wording!
Question! Does writing come easy to you? But then, you don't have to answer that...
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 Chakramchucker 2005-09-07 . chapter 1What a tear jerker! I loved the descriptions and... well, everything. Seriously, this is awesome. |
 James 2004-10-14 . chapter 1 I was moved very much by your story. You have a genuine talent for bringing a reader into the situations you describe, covering them with imagery that brings the scenes and characters alive in a way rarely seen.
The part when the dragon is reliving his memories was an excellent insight into this character. His earliest childhood memories are inspired and well-written.
I could not find anything really to complain about. This was a well written piece and congratulate you wholeheartedly. |
 nightdragon0 2004-09-07 . chapter 1Truly a well done scene, though with a bittersweet ending! |
 danilion 2004-06-24 . chapter 1e... :'(... sadsadsad... |
 Blake Wales 2004-06-21 . chapter 1Wow... really powerful. Kinda depressing how the dragon accepted his death while reliving moments of his heart-warming past.
You'll understand if I didn't get around to reading this right away. You're much better than you give yourself credit for! |
 Vilverin 2004-06-18 . chapter 1This is awesome ^_^ You have such vivid descriptions I can see the scene unfolding in my mind. Your writing is also very poetic which adds a lot to story. Great :-)
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