Mademoiselle, I'm going to try to read through each one, starting here. The last three lines go really well together (and they are my favorite); the whole poem is brilliantly cohesive in a disorganized way. Imagery is very Gothic and dark: excellent.

this one's good too. my friend Kim just read it and she says it's scary, but scary to her is a lot different than scary to me. really good!

Another great poem. I really like your style of writing, you know. The two poems you posted read almost like narratives. I like that they don't rhyme too.
From both of them I get a vision of a semi-clouded night, with a full moon half obscured by the clouds, and of a girl walking alone in the graveyard...very cool!
Great job. I'll try and make a point of checking out some of your other work when you get it posted. _