Why do you have to be such a good writer? this one is so great too, like all the rest of them, i'm jealous, i can't write this good.

I agree lol.
"sins eat us faster" favourite line...

This is very powerful. I like it alot. I especially liked the last three lines, although the last one is my all time favorite of the three.
This had strong imagery, and to tell you the truth it had a very clear supernatural quality to it. Great job!
I have a poem about the Graveyard too. Perhaps you would like to check it out? *hopeful look* lol.
Jessica