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| Dangerous Joe 2005-09-05 ch 1,  | abuse*sniff* so touching! |
| Katrina G. Cortious 2004-12-02 ch 1, | abuseWow, you're the one that wrote that poem? It's excellent! I'm so impressed. |
| pooky wingz 2004-11-23 ch 1, | abuseaw...KAWAII!! so cute! man i luv it!! aw...poor lil boy *crys* luv da poem luv! it luv it! ok so emotional *crys* |
| JuLiA 2004-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseNORAQ! gak ngerti! huhuhu..sedie..bener2 susah d mengerti man! huhuhuhu..XP sedie..sedie..ur choice of word pada JUMBO2 smua.. |
| Isle of View 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abusei really really realy really really really like this! great job! |
| Joey-xp 2004-09-03 ch 1, anon. | abusehmm... this is soo gud kim. but y dont u try adding more... more... ryme? it will be gold if u do. trust me. |
| Oath 2004-08-31 ch 1, | abuseI think your poem is very beautiful and very heartfelt, heh for a 12 yr old its not half bad. j/k i'd rather not go by years, go by expieriences... Great job. its amazing that you wrote this to a person you don't even know, it's like your wrote this to your brother, its really touching. |
| ssjlavenderkid 2004-08-23 ch 1, | abuseIt's so sweet. I can't write poems for nuts. *shakes head* * ** * Wow, you're Chinese, Dutch, Indonesian, Japanese and something else...cool. I'm part Japanese, part Chinese.(Not as complexed as you.) * ** * Gotta go! (RIKU FROM KINGDOM HEARTS ROCKS!) |
| J.E.Wyatt 2004-08-18 ch 1, | abuseWoow, I read all your poems...well most of it. And they're very good! I didnt have time to read your fics though, but I'll get to it whn i find the time. But right now Im living in korea... -_-" school here starts this monday and im getting ready...I USED to live in canada when the days were more easier *sigh* o well, thnx for reviewing my fic! =) |
| aurorakittykat 2004-08-05 ch 1, | abuseSorry I took such a long time to review! I was away for a while and hadn't checked this at all...anyways, back to your poem, it's very good, nice meter and flow to it as well. Keep writing! |
| Ayx 2004-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was really sweet and beautiful. Strikes that cord that brings you on the brink of tears. Ayx |
| Sea Jade 2004-07-09 ch 1, | abuseits really good! i wrote a poem for my friends dad, you see he died yesterday from cancer, but im not putting the poem up because it makes me cry, but yours reminded me of it...oh dear, im gonna go cry again |
| AnotherFace 2004-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI love it! |
| sleepy-sentry 2004-06-18 ch 1, | abuseSad, yet satisfying. |