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hear me smile 2006-04-27 . chapter 1
Makes me feel all warm and cozy. Vivid, vivid imagery. Has a very content feel to it. Good job.
The Raging Raven 2004-06-22 . chapter 1
You know, I don't know wheher you intended to or not, but it gives me the image of snowy white birds not snowflakes. Until the line 'On invisible wings they continue their flight'Then they take the form of snow again in my opinion! The descriptions are so vivid! Thx for the comment!!
Glass in the Shape of a Heart 2004-06-18 . chapter 1
*yawns* This made me *yawns* kinda sleepy too. lol Great poem! I liked it!!
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