Wow, that is just, just awesome! You have such good ideas for your poems, the last line was perfect! Good comparison! This is going on my favorites too!

Nice poem! I like the foreign titles, they're much less mundane than English titles.

Just like the review I just wrote. This is a new kind of thing I've seen, short story-poems and it just has a good grip and good everything really.

aw thats cool! makes me wanna go dance even though i cant dance, LOL! nice job yet again!

Nice! I liked the metaphor. Well written too. :)