I can really relate to this one. Made me think of my poems "Shards" and "A cut for each mistake". Sometimes it's harder to forgive oneself than to accept forgiveness from others. Your poems have a nice flow to them, owing to the rhyme and rhythm.

Wow...this...is...fricking fantastic. Wow what to say...what to say? I don't know what to say. I'll just say brilliantly done, and wow...wow. I love this. Great job.

brilliant. i like this poem. keep on writing. rnr mine too.

very expressive! you know, i can totally relate to this one! thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. this sounds like my poems "guilt", "if i could", "unknowledgeable", and "this big mouth of mine". please read them whenever you get the chance. thanks in advance!

I love the way it's written and can most definitely relate. Life stinks sometimes...and like me it can't make up its mind whether or not it's headed up or down. Oh well. Great poem! I'll be sure to check out some others of yours.

Wow. My heart really felt every single word of that poem. I loved it.

Very powerful poem. Gosh, this poem really struck a nerve. I hope your forgiven by your friend, and yourself! Please continue writing!