That was beautifully written ^_^ I normally get bored during a one chapter story half way through, but this held my attention all the way. And I loved the ending... sad but with a sort of wistful, hopeful feel to it. Well, that's how I read it anyway. x

Wow. Are you a professional author? And if not, why not? This was very well written. It could easily be expanded into an best-selling novel. All the loose ends were tied up very nicely. Perhaps the whole revealing of georgina sands was too sudden and too convient. Amazing job! Thank you for sharing.

Absolutely perfect!

Still an outstanding author as ever.

This is probably the best short love story I've ever read in my entire reading life.

But the funny thing is, I was crying from the start to end of this story, and I honestly don't know why.

I don't quite understand why the other reviewers didn't like Cecil. While you started out describing him as a smarmy bastard, he turned into a good husband, and he made Cat happy. Doesn't that count for something?

I liked this story. It's unique, which is a quality you don't seem to find very often these days.

I do have a few complaints, however. Your grammar could use a lot work, and I do wish you had spent more time describing the characters' emotions. I think it would have made them all a bit more real. And Evelyn really was a bit one dimensional -although that may have been purposeful on your point.

All in all, this was an enjoyable story, with the exception of the grammar. (Sorry, but I really am anal about grammar.) I'll keep an eye out for anything else you've written.

may i just say that i hated cecil and i wish he had died sooner so that martin and cat could have gotten together? I mean, what a selfish bastard! On the other hand, the fact that i hate his character so much can mean only one thing: you're a terrific writer

ok this is just plain sad.how unfair!
poor martin...sigh.
er,anyway,kepe up the good work.
but it'd be emotionally better,be it sad or happy,if u described and expressed their emotions more.then u can try manipulating the reader's feelings

wow...this is so good. excellent, and very sad. and so nice to have a heroine who isnt perfect. i really enjoyed this (and my eyes are a wee bit damp right now, have to admit)
ps. have to say Alan Rickman has a lovely voice, even though im not overly keen on the english accent!!

Very cute story, definately one to think about. Not sappy in the least. I'm really glad I read it. Only thing I can think of is that you often use then where than would be better. Not sure though.