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| Madeeha Imtiaz 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautifully written ^_^ I normally get bored during a one chapter story half way through, but this held my attention all the way. And I loved the ending... sad but with a sort of wistful, hopeful feel to it. Well, that's how I read it anyway. x |
| TornXAngel 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseWow. Are you a professional author? And if not, why not? This was very well written. It could easily be expanded into an best-selling novel. All the loose ends were tied up very nicely. Perhaps the whole revealing of georgina sands was too sudden and too convient. Amazing job! Thank you for sharing. |
| ThirteenSugars 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely perfect! Still an outstanding author as ever. This is probably the best short love story I've ever read in my entire reading life. But the funny thing is, I was crying from the start to end of this story, and I honestly don't know why. |
| Foenixfyre 2005-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI don't quite understand why the other reviewers didn't like Cecil. While you started out describing him as a smarmy bastard, he turned into a good husband, and he made Cat happy. Doesn't that count for something? I liked this story. It's unique, which is a quality you don't seem to find very often these days. I do have a few complaints, however. Your grammar could use a lot work, and I do wish you had spent more time describing the characters' emotions. I think it would have made them all a bit more real. And Evelyn really was a bit one dimensional -although that may have been purposeful on your point. All in all, this was an enjoyable story, with the exception of the grammar. (Sorry, but I really am anal about grammar.) I'll keep an eye out for anything else you've written. |
| anon 2004-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abusemay i just say that i hated cecil and i wish he had died sooner so that martin and cat could have gotten together? I mean, what a selfish bastard! On the other hand, the fact that i hate his character so much can mean only one thing: you're a terrific writer |
| beve 2004-11-17 ch 1, | abuseok this is just plain sad.how unfair! poor martin...sigh. er,anyway,kepe up the good work. but it'd be emotionally better,be it sad or happy,if u described and expressed their emotions more.then u can try manipulating the reader's feelings |
| wee-rebz 2004-06-21 ch 1, | abusewow...this is so good. excellent, and very sad. and so nice to have a heroine who isnt perfect. i really enjoyed this (and my eyes are a wee bit damp right now, have to admit) ps. have to say Alan Rickman has a lovely voice, even though im not overly keen on the english accent!! |
| Valoria Gilden 2004-06-19 ch 1, | abuseVery cute story, definately one to think about. Not sappy in the least. I'm really glad I read it. Only thing I can think of is that you often use then where than would be better. Not sure though. |