No. Just, no. That was so cliche, so stupid, so- so- Oh God I hate you for that. It was SO AWSOME and then the last chapter just butchered it.

I'm so glad it's over. But not like that. XD I mean, I'm glad I found a good story with an actual endidng, not one that just gets dropped out of the blue. Well, excepts that I hate the ending with passion, but no one's perfect.

kind of like another persons story pink gender and pink gender origins from the summaryjust to let you know.

That was a fun story! Loved reading it.

this story is so funny.

Wow, getting himself into trouble already! Kinda impressive.

Oh! So that was the lesson! Heh. I like the introductions when Natalie and Luke run into each other.

But...what was the lesson? Hehe, yay! He's normal!

...Allison is scary...

"DEAR LORD THE GIRL CAN GET PERKIER?!?!?!?!" My favourite line! But seriously, she CAN?!

This plan is going crazy!! So much is happening!!

Trogdor is amazing!! :D

...he is SUCH a girly girl! It is terrifying. Poor Allison! She probably isn't behind this...I hope...

Yay! Someone pointed it out! Ethan gains a point.

..watch him be wrong. Oh my, this is all a bit extreme! Can't he just learn his lesson? Revenge is not the answer!!

So, NOW he gets that idea? Took him awhile...wonder if it's true?

...he is terrible at explanations!!