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| Azzie-chan 2006-08-24 ch 30,  | abuseNo. Just, no. That was so cliche, so stupid, so- so- Oh God I hate you for that. It was SO AWSOME and then the last chapter just butchered it. I'm so glad it's over. But not like that. XD I mean, I'm glad I found a good story with an actual endidng, not one that just gets dropped out of the blue. Well, excepts that I hate the ending with passion, but no one's perfect. |
| love it 2006-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abusekind of like another persons story pink gender and pink gender origins from the summaryjust to let you know. |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 30, | abuseThat was a fun story! Loved reading it. |
| caramel blazers 2006-04-16 ch 30, | abusethis story is so funny. |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 29, | abuseWow, getting himself into trouble already! Kinda impressive. |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 28, | abuseOh! So that was the lesson! Heh. I like the introductions when Natalie and Luke run into each other. |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 27, | abuseBut...what was the lesson? Hehe, yay! He's normal! |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 26, | abuse...Allison is scary... |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 25, | abuse"DEAR LORD THE GIRL CAN GET PERKIER?!?!?!?!" My favourite line! But seriously, she CAN?! |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 24, | abuseThis plan is going crazy!! So much is happening!! Trogdor is amazing!! :D |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 23, | abuse...he is SUCH a girly girl! It is terrifying. Poor Allison! She probably isn't behind this...I hope... |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 22, | abuseYay! Someone pointed it out! Ethan gains a point. |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 21, | abuse..watch him be wrong. Oh my, this is all a bit extreme! Can't he just learn his lesson? Revenge is not the answer!! |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 20, | abuseSo, NOW he gets that idea? Took him awhile...wonder if it's true? |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-04-16 ch 19, | abuse...he is terrible at explanations!! |