Reviews for Atlantic Herring
Kelpylion 12/29/04 . chapter 1
*sadistic chuckle*Loved the play on words, brief image, cynical comment trio; very nice , hering...
Alex-Blake 7/4/04 . chapter 1
I love this random but crazily depressing.
twilightwriter07 7/2/04 . chapter 1
I like it...the second line has me thinking a little...don't know why, but I love the word choice in it. Thanks for your reviews. _
Made in U.S.A 6/28/04 . chapter 1
I love it even though I usually hate haikus. Keep writing.
sleepy-sentry 6/20/04 . chapter 1
Oh, how original. Being an Atlantic Herring would be fun until you got eaten.
Tommy2007 6/20/04 . chapter 1
This is good, I love the "Grey mirror, without image" metaphor. It's well written as a haiku about nature, but also has a humorous quality about it. Very good. Please R&R some of my stuff, thanks.
catseyeview 6/19/04 . chapter 1
the "grey mirror, without image," really has me thinking...oh! I just got it, the school, tuna. stupid me! nice poem!
lisaslife 6/19/04 . chapter 1
Hmm.. I made salmon patties! Sorry, the word tuna made me think of it!
Cry Tears of Darkness 6/19/04 . chapter 1
hehehe! i like it.