|Reviews for Bleeding, Toxic Demise|
| Mindi 6/20/04 . chapter 1
I dunno about the banshee but the "silver savior" is awesome... love it! great poem hun- you lie when u say ur stuff aint great
| Junsui-chan 6/20/04 . chapter 1
Wow...that was a lil' disturbing. Though I can't say I haven't thought or done something similar to that before. But hey, I got better. Anyway, good poem. Not all poetry has to rhyme. It was really good, I thought, and anyone who says differently is just being stupid. Keep writing.
| ERSM333 6/19/04 . chapter 1
This was amazingly graphic but amazingly graphic. I really liked it. It touches me somewhere deep inside, and I felt it a whole writing, and keep reaching deep inside of yourself. That is what makes it good.
| black-heart-black-life 6/19/04 . chapter 1
That was not bad it was good
| sarcastic-student 6/19/04 . chapter 1
One word dude: graphic. But you did a great job with this, it was sad but it didn't "beg for sympathy". Nice work.
| breakme 6/19/04 . chapter 1
Okay your way too critical of your own work. THIS ROCKS! It does make sense and I like the format alot. Its deep and vivid and it flows really well. This is probally one of the best poems I've read on fictionpress. Good Job.