I dunno about the banshee but the "silver savior" is awesome... love it! great poem hun- you lie when u say ur stuff aint great

Wow...that was a lil' disturbing. Though I can't say I haven't thought or done something similar to that before. But hey, I got better. Anyway, good poem. Not all poetry has to rhyme. It was really good, I thought, and anyone who says differently is just being stupid. Keep writing.

This was amazingly graphic but amazingly graphic. I really liked it. It touches me somewhere deep inside, and I felt it a whole writing, and keep reaching deep inside of yourself. That is what makes it good.

That was not bad it was good

One word dude: graphic. But you did a great job with this, it was sad but it didn't "beg for sympathy". Nice work.

Okay your way too critical of your own work. THIS ROCKS! It does make sense and I like the format alot. Its deep and vivid and it flows really well. This is probally one of the best poems I've read on fictionpress. Good Job.