i can honestly say i applaud you for your work. very well done.

wow... very very creepy and powerful but unfortunateloy true

that was intense/i dint quite like the theme but you stuck to it and played it out great.Your form wasgoodbut it got shakey in a couple spots.over all i think this is a decent flow.
~aMoOn
(Nats friend)

my god, very impressive rhyming!
And the last two lines... wow! Without exaggeration, i say this is a great poem. Two thumbs up!