I love it. A broad range of topics all forming together to make one story. It's awesome.

Very impressive. I like the way it feels when spoken. It's strong, precise, and I just love it. Great message, keep it up.

ooh. That was good. You're talented with words. I'm not good with poetry. You're lucky! ^_^ I looked through some of your other works as well. You're really, really good.

All your poems seem like song lyrics to me, like I just want to pick up a microphone and scream them till the whole world listens. Yes, nice, nice job.
fxc
April Thursday

This poem is amazing. With poems as good and as long as this, I always wonder how long they took to write...
~A. Person

amazing. more than amazing. usually i cant read long things, but it sucked me in and i was riveted to the screen, unable to break away. just... amazing.

I like. It's thought provocing (i know i just spelled that wrong) its really cool.

hmm, you make it see easy to surmise human existance, but you also make the concept seem sad. Weather you really ment to, you added a hopeless touch to mankind... I donno. I can't begin to understand why we are here or what is really true or not, but I know that for some God is more that a representation of hope... Consider this a complementary review since you got me thinkin.

damn...you just continue to amaze me. bravo!

wow.that was deep and not very long to have been filled with all those topics.

Your such a great writer...Its such a good poem and you express your views very well. Feel free to email me! easily_forgotten16@yahoo.com
Alexa A.K.A Lexington
Whichever you perfer

this is realy impresive. It has a very strong voice. Although i'm no poet.

You politely asked me to review your story, and although I don't care for begging authors, I'll review one of your works.
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All of your works are part of the Poetry genre, one that I never particularly cared for. I never understood the passion that some writers could find in the simple poetic lines, but perhaps that is why I am not a poet.
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As for your poetry, I have read three, your three most recent. I do not know much about poetry, but I do know that in order for poems to be rythmic they must have just that - rythm. Each line must have the correct syllables and go with the line after that. However, that's only textbook, and I daresay I don't know one person who actually follows that.
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What your poems lack in rythm they make up for in capability. In your poems you can see that the author's mind is wise and capable of large, complicated thoughts, and simply wants the world to see through her eyes, even if just for a small while.
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Works for me. If there is any poetry I have a fondness for, it would be poetry with opinions, and metaphores. Lots of opinions and metaphores. And that is this poem.

ahh! this is great.. i don't even know what to say. fantastic voice, great word choice.. this is going on my favorite's.
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~eRicA~

Wow...this is amazing! I love the feeling behind it, and the language...just wow. You’re an awesome poet!