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wow this is powerful... Such envy. I can relate since I know someone who fits the description... who can 'effortlessly succeed in every aspect of your life'. She sucks! I wish her a perfect death.

Yikes! Well written, of course. It gave me shivers. Who are you talking about, that is if you care to tell me. Have you been anonymously reviewing me pretending o be someone else... just wondering. Hope you aren't still mad at me as you seemed to be last tie we talked, I'm sorry if I have offended you. Luvs,
~Bethy~

HAHA!! yu must be such a wicked person!! but great idea and great poem - totally PERFECT

This acutally made me laugh! Only because I know somebody who can think on the parallel terms! lol. Very good I liked how you switched the perfect pills over to something poisonous for a perfect death. Sweet!
Jaden-

oh man... this is perfect in itself... so very powerful and the end wraps everything up nicely

nice. you know, those "perfect" people really need to lead work on their personalities. anyway, good job!

that was PERFECTLY evil
REALLY REALLY good
haha I wish I could give her the perfect pill too!