Very nice, sent out a clear flow of the intimate act. I could almost picture it in my mind good work.

really simple. and no emotion here to show that it is very lustful. nice descriptions...true story?

Sensual lesbian poem...Nice 'un :-)

*melts*

Aw short and sweet little poem. I like the lesbian content, nice to see some good poems about lesbian love.. hehe. Keep on writing girl.
Jenna xx