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| sleeping Pisces 2006-03-29 ch 1,  | abuseNice. Its always good to take a break from the outside world and look inside to see what is there. This may lack the inner messages of your other poems I've read so far, but I think thats also a good thing. I have done a simmilar (but much less involved, as it is a haiku) version of this about my old pename Summercloud (which I am thinking of going back too). Oh, and kudos for having the courage to not only look insde yourself, but also for sharing it with anyone who cares to read. Peace, Daze |
| Charity F 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWOOT WOOT!! EXCELLENTELY! YEY! this was very descriptive and you have some quite vivid imagery going on here... (quote)"My eyes rage and flare with the power of volcanoes rapidly erupting My skin is as velvety and smooth as hundreds of steaming mugs of milkycoffee My hair is as wild and boisterous like the lashing, infuriated, rollingwaves in a fierce storm" lol...very nice...draw a picture!! that would look very cool...^^ keep it up!! |
| black*tears*of*innocence 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abusewow, this is a really nice description of you. i love the imagry you put into it. good job. its really unique. i love that in writing. great job and KW! thanx for the review!! (i can't remember if you reviewed me once, or more. i'll have to check. i only have one of yours one my screen right now) but, yeah, thanx. it was really nice. write forever and always... ~davida |
| The Postscript 2005-09-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat writing...I remember writing these when I was younger. They're quite fun to do and really get your mind thinking discriptive, thinking images. Keep writing. |
| JustForgetMe 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseTheres lots of description!..Nice! |
| Eternal Light101 2004-06-24 ch 1, | abuseWow thats all i can say. Wow! Well except maybe breathtaking pieace of writing. I wrote a poem similer to this one. The name is I am from. Maybe you could chck it out. I would love to see what you think about it. Flames Out Eternal Light |