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Reviews For: Oh What You've Done To Me
A.Dee 2004-07-08 . chapter 1
This was REALLY good! I liked that line "Everytime I start to build my heart again,
You come by with that smile,
You crush the fragile pieces,
The pieces I worked so hard to retrieve" it was really. . .well, I just liked it.
A.Dee
Fallen Oblivion 2004-06-20 . chapter 1
Wow! I can relate to this. There's a person I know who does this to me and whenever I think I am truely free from them, they come back just to ruin my life. I really enjoyed reading this,thanks for writing it.
crimsoninfinity 2004-06-20 . chapter 1
... that sounds like you're having a hard time. No one writes like that for fun, there's always truth behind the poetry and form. This was a great piece of work and you should be uplifted by the fact that someone atleast appreaciates you.
Only time will tell the future, only nature will tell the past. All you can do is wait, if not you wont last.
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