I like how it all rhymes! It reminds of some gothic chant...well, a modern one at least. Lol. Keep on writing!

YOUR LANGUAGE AND WORD CHOICE IS AWESOME, AS ALWAYS..

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! I ADORED this piece! You must write really well when you're half asleep.
Loved the rhyming pattern and the rhythm and some of the lines, particularly "Blakc eyeliner paint me dead", and the repetition of the first line was effective too.
Keep up the good work.
*Blows out the candle*
Blessed Be,
PK

Wow. That's very powerful, and absolutely wonderful. So many images...hence the title, images. *claps* Truly wonderful piece!
Rozie x

0_0 Wow... *jealous* Hehehe... That was awsome... ... ... 0_0 Wow... You kick major booty! This must be one of my favorites of yours! Keep it up!

This was magnificent. ^_^ I liked it a lot. Your rhyming is beautiful, and although it is very short, it's like it was an entire story. I like this a lot. ^_^ Reminds me of Mana, for some unknown reason...
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Hmn...
JUKA! *glomps and gnaws on his head*

Kick **! I need to get Angry Fairy to read this one!

Very good, as usual. The image of beauty has gotten too far in today's world...

yAy! I KNEW you could do it! yAy!
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This is cool! the same sound rhymed thru-out the poem? cool! that is NOT easy .. doubt I could do it any better! I love how you repeated the first line at the end, it was so powerful! And there is a powerful idea here!
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I don't want to get you upset, but the only thing I'd change is "muderer's". Doesn't sound right to me. Try like killer, or slasher, or pervert, or something. Soz!

Wow. Dark. Creepy. Interesting. "Wishes to rape my mother instead" That made me laugh, actually. I like the line you began and ended it with "Lipstick, color me dark red" Very nice.