this was very honest and very real
if this is true then is this your first girlfriend?
it seemed hurtful-the story portrayed that...it was a job well done
good luck with future loves

A nice little descriptive piece, you got so personal about it, I'm wondering if all of this happened to you. ~_^ hehe, I like this very much even the angst behind it of course and not knowing what the hell this other girl really wants. Even the slightest tinge of love, thinking if you love someone... yes I believe it's the same as loving someone. Because that spark is there right? Good work. I'm glad to finally read a beautiful (personal) piece of fiction by you. I hope you'll update again soon. ^_^
Jenna xx