|Reviews for Haiku collection: Friendship|
| mezzie 4/25/06 . chapter 29
lovely, the line that really touched my was "nestle shyly in my tears"mezzie
| Ygg 4/25/06 . chapter 28
Poems as tears.. wow very original and creative! The flow too is amazing. You're really a brilliant writer you know :)
| Vivian Rose Pierce 3/24/06 . chapter 27
Very nicely writen. I like it...you don't normaly think of giving as recieving, but how correct you are.
| Gwalchmai 3/24/06 . chapter 27
Wow! Captures the true spirit of Haiku.
| cygnus olor 1/30/06 . chapter 1
it's so rare that i appreciate haikus... but thanks to you i now think otherwise...
i love your imagery and allegory..."tears of liquid stone""let me weep your tears""so much beauty in sadness"
everything was heartfelt and i feel for 2 particular haikus: "like the wind" and "everything"
i'm so glad to find someone who values friendship as i do...
* ner *
| nanashi-04 1/1/06 . chapter 1
I love it.
| white-clouds 12/20/05 . chapter 1
| white-clouds 12/20/05 . chapter 26
When I read that, I felt the whole room come alive. That was very beautiful.
| H.S.H 12/20/05 . chapter 26
Very good. Very realistic.
| Gwalchmai 12/20/05 . chapter 26
what a smile! confusing time itself; please, keep on writing ...and breathing
| myno 12/20/05 . chapter 26
gentle, sweet, lovely.
| tenshi-no-uta 12/20/05 . chapter 26
Beautiful. *nods* Very well written.-Tenshi
| crushed by a dandelion 12/20/05 . chapter 26
You really have to think about the rhythm. How it flows as Haiku. And then, I think how you put the whole story into three. little. lines. Which is amazing.
| smile persephone 12/20/05 . chapter 26
Simply beautiful (as a haiku should be). I adore the concept of breathing memories.
| Gwalchmai 12/20/05 . chapter 24
I love the sound of version 2; besides, it avoids the artificial split between "doing" and "saying", as, after all, there are words that can hurt more profoundly, than many a violent "deed"...