lovely, the line that really touched my was "nestle shyly in my tears"mezzie

Poems as tears.. wow very original and creative! The flow too is amazing. You're really a brilliant writer you know :)

Very nicely writen. I like it...you don't normaly think of giving as recieving, but how correct you are.

Wow! Captures the true spirit of Haiku.

it's so rare that i appreciate haikus... but thanks to you i now think otherwise...

i love your imagery and allegory..."tears of liquid stone""let me weep your tears""so much beauty in sadness"

everything was heartfelt and i feel for 2 particular haikus: "like the wind" and "everything"

i'm so glad to find someone who values friendship as i do...

* ner *

I love it.

That's sweet!

When I read that, I felt the whole room come alive. That was very beautiful.

Very good. Very realistic.

what a smile! confusing time itself; please, keep on writing ...and breathing

gentle, sweet, lovely.

Beautiful. *nods* Very well written.-Tenshi

You really have to think about the rhythm. How it flows as Haiku. And then, I think how you put the whole story into three. little. lines. Which is amazing.

Simply beautiful (as a haiku should be). I adore the concept of breathing memories.

I love the sound of version 2; besides, it avoids the artificial split between "doing" and "saying", as, after all, there are words that can hurt more profoundly, than many a violent "deed"...