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| muchlove4noone 2004-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, i love this so much! BE HAPPY! but do keep on writing... |
| Cambio 2004-06-20 ch 1, | abusewow that be awesome. Seriously though, your late night poems are getting darker (unaviodable play on words) every time you write one. Still an excelent poem though. |
| Nienyalie 2004-06-20 ch 1, | abuseThe comparison of darkness to things is good, but I feel it could be better. The message is good none the less. Keep writing! |