 til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 2004-06-27 . chapter 1Wow, this is powerful. This is a poem. If no other reason that it evokes emotions from people.
"Maybe hearts were made to be broken,
But playing with fire only makes the
pain worse."
Those were 2 of my favorite lines. I like this a lot. You're going on my alert list.
keep writing-
til-iburnout
P.S. Thanks for your review on It Can't Be True, Can It? It meant a lot to me, and reviews like yours gives me the courage to put up my poetry no matter about the flames. |