Wow. This was awesome. I think you said in your profile that you were 15, and if that's the case, then you are going places, my friend. Your poems are wonderful. I'm scanning through them all I as write this, and am so impressed by your talent at such an age. Never stop writing! This stuff is great!

It beautiful. I like your word choice, and your discriptions as well.
*Letting Images Flow into words is
Simply-dazzling*

I love the second...stanza? verse? whatever. I love it. Are you a Girl Scout? Because the song would suggest it, but I don't know...

This is beautiful. It's going into my favorites. Please review some of my poems please.

This is really sophisticated. Major thumbsuppage :D

I. Love. This. Poem! I really didn't understand where it was going until the end, but I like how you lead me on to finally discover that it had something to do with a person that the character in the poem cared deeply for. That was good because you kept me interested in why you keep remembering this flower.
It all ties in at the end!
Great job!
Kanne