fascinating. by 'she was found,' do you mean that she died when the sun rose? that does sound like a myth, but other than that, it doesn't seem supernatural at all, just a nice tale of a girl communing with nature, which is most beautiful in its own way.

I think it's good. Kind of leaves me curious to what happens, and seems incomplete, which is okay because I think you said it's just free writing. ^^; So yeah, I really like the description. There's not to much of it, and not to little.

Hey Bunns, I found this on your blog-- I love the imagery! It's interesting how you used temperatures and sounds to make it seem more real. 'Very good! ^^