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| Ajna 2005-12-11 ch 1,  | abuseI love this; the anger and sadness of it all. Well done. :) |
| pencilchewer 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was good the emotions were strong and its sad that you had to betrayed like that but on the actual opoem it didnt seem to flow very well or rhyme much but i still thought it was good |
| pacopuppy 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abusei loved ur poem! well done! btw, my dad's a ups guy, so u hate him? *megan* |
| Pablo Diaz 2004-07-11 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written, each words brought me closer to your deep pain. |
| SleepDontWeep 2004-07-03 ch 1, | abusedeep o so deep! i no wot it feels like betrayal just kills!! |
| Catticus 2004-06-24 ch 1, | abusehey where did the story "trinket" make off to? i liked that story! but ya, tell me where it went please? thanks. great poem by the way. cheers |
| Lady Sunlight 2004-06-20 ch 1, | abuseSheeny, I can't believe you had to go through that. I'm seriously worried about what might happen. Why does all this ** seem to happen to us all at the worst times? I hope this all works out for the best. You have us all on your side. |