I love this; the anger and sadness of it all. Well done. :)

That was good the emotions were strong and its sad that you had to betrayed like that but on the actual opoem it didnt seem to flow very well or rhyme much but i still thought it was good

i loved ur poem! well done! btw, my dad's a ups guy, so u hate him?
*megan*

Wonderfully written, each words brought me closer to your deep pain.

deep o so deep! i no wot it feels like betrayal just kills!!

hey where did the story "trinket" make off to? i liked that story! but ya, tell me where it went please? thanks.
great poem by the way. cheers

Sheeny, I can't believe you had to go through that. I'm seriously worried about what might happen. Why does all this ** seem to happen to us all at the worst times? I hope this all works out for the best. You have us all on your side.