I didn't like this piece as well... I dont really know why, it's just a little odd... It's rhythms different. And I'm so confused... I need some Craisins...

Hello Chloe, or should I say Wren! O, I do like this name better there I voted! Anyway, I really like this piece, is it a poem or a story. Anyway it doesn't matter, I liked it. The contence makes it almost reality to me. I felt like I was there in the room with the blood all over the walls. you know?! Well, good job!
Jaden- AKA Guy McLaughlin!

Wonderful poetry, good job.

really good
probably would be better if i had read the book... its now at the top of my readin list! I wrote a new song, check it out, format went a bit screwy but i think its pretty good. deffinetly different