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Reviews For: Cheaters Never Prosper
eskimoxisses 2007-12-23 . chapter 5
Pretty awesome. Revenge is always bitter, isn't it..
Salkiethia 2006-12-29 . chapter 5
Wow that was good. I think you could have put a little more detail into it to make it stretch out longer, but the way you presented it here was great, too. I want to know more about Detective LeTueur now... That was a great twist at the end, by the way.
Skyla Ladona 2006-06-26 . chapter 5
wow . . . I like twists. They're fun. Great story.
Skyla Ladona 2006-06-26 . chapter 1
This is really good. I like your description of Mrs. Whitworth. I'm curious to know what our professional killer will do in this situation. I'm half expecting something's fishy about this. Good stuff!
EriEka127 2006-03-27 . chapter 5
love it!
RiverDoe 2004-07-30 . chapter 5
a little farfetched but still good story
Liviania 2004-06-30 . chapter 5
The part about him having dated her once was a bit far-fetched, but I thought the rest of the conclusion was an interesting idea.
Livi
Liviania 2004-06-28 . chapter 3
Very detailed...nicely vicious last sentence.
Livi
slave to the voices 2004-06-24 . chapter 2
Again, a nice turn of events; completely unexpected (I'm a little disappointed in myself, I usually see them coming.) And, as always, your work is well written and creative. I will be checking in now and then to look for a new chapter. Great work, keep writing.
**Slave**
Thanks for the kind reviews of "Mother", "That's What Friends Are For", and "The Troll". Actually, thank you for reviewing all my work, to recieve praise from a talented writer like yourself is truely appreciated.
slave to the voices 2004-06-24 . chapter 1
Awesome beginning! I'm so hooked on this already. Nice twist in the middle, I just assumed... Anyway, I can't waste anymore time here, I must see the next chapter!
**Slave**
RiverDoe 2004-06-24 . chapter 2
Man, this is good. I like the way the husband and wife are setting each other up and am keen to find out how this goes.
Liviania 2004-06-21 . chapter 2
Oh...husband and wife discount deals might need to be offered.
Livi
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