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| eskimoxisses 2007-12-23 ch 5,  | Pretty awesome. Revenge is always bitter, isn't it.. |
| Marajohuiki 2006-12-29 ch 5,  | Wow that was good. I think you could have put a little more detail into it to make it stretch out longer, but the way you presented it here was great, too. I want to know more about Detective LeTueur now... That was a great twist at the end, by the way. |
| Skyla Ladona 2006-06-26 ch 5, | wow . . . I like twists. They're fun. Great story. |
| Skyla Ladona 2006-06-26 ch 1, | This is really good. I like your description of Mrs. Whitworth. I'm curious to know what our professional killer will do in this situation. I'm half expecting something's fishy about this. Good stuff! |
| EriEka127 2006-03-27 ch 5, | love it! |
| RiverDoe 2004-07-30 ch 5, | a little farfetched but still good story |
| Liviania 2004-06-30 ch 5, | The part about him having dated her once was a bit far-fetched, but I thought the rest of the conclusion was an interesting idea. Livi |
| Liviania 2004-06-28 ch 3, | Very detailed...nicely vicious last sentence. Livi |
| slave to the voices 2004-06-24 ch 2, | Again, a nice turn of events; completely unexpected (I'm a little disappointed in myself, I usually see them coming.) And, as always, your work is well written and creative. I will be checking in now and then to look for a new chapter. Great work, keep writing. **Slave** Thanks for the kind reviews of "Mother", "That's What Friends Are For", and "The Troll". Actually, thank you for reviewing all my work, to recieve praise from a talented writer like yourself is truely appreciated. |
| slave to the voices 2004-06-24 ch 1, | Awesome beginning! I'm so hooked on this already. Nice twist in the middle, I just assumed... Anyway, I can't waste anymore time here, I must see the next chapter! **Slave** |
| RiverDoe 2004-06-24 ch 2, | Man, this is good. I like the way the husband and wife are setting each other up and am keen to find out how this goes. |
| Liviania 2004-06-21 ch 2, | Oh...husband and wife discount deals might need to be offered. Livi |