Pretty awesome. Revenge is always bitter, isn't it..

Wow that was good. I think you could have put a little more detail into it to make it stretch out longer, but the way you presented it here was great, too. I want to know more about Detective LeTueur now... That was a great twist at the end, by the way.

wow . . . I like twists. They're fun. Great story.

This is really good. I like your description of Mrs. Whitworth. I'm curious to know what our professional killer will do in this situation. I'm half expecting something's fishy about this. Good stuff!

love it!

a little farfetched but still good story

The part about him having dated her once was a bit far-fetched, but I thought the rest of the conclusion was an interesting idea.
Livi

Very detailed...nicely vicious last sentence.
Livi

Again, a nice turn of events; completely unexpected (I'm a little disappointed in myself, I usually see them coming.) And, as always, your work is well written and creative. I will be checking in now and then to look for a new chapter. Great work, keep writing.
**Slave**
Thanks for the kind reviews of "Mother", "That's What Friends Are For", and "The Troll". Actually, thank you for reviewing all my work, to recieve praise from a talented writer like yourself is truely appreciated.

Awesome beginning! I'm so hooked on this already. Nice twist in the middle, I just assumed... Anyway, I can't waste anymore time here, I must see the next chapter!
**Slave**

Man, this is good. I like the way the husband and wife are setting each other up and am keen to find out how this goes.

Oh...husband and wife discount deals might need to be offered.
Livi