Very beautiful... although it seems very sad, the ending has something positive to look forward to. Nice job Steppenwoelfin.

That was his sister I bet. ::Fades away::

wow..that was...powerful.

That was tragically beautiful. Excellent writing through and through. Only problem I could see was a slight overabundance of passive voice - many of those "had"s could have been cut away from the verbs, and the prose would flow better. Wonderful story overall, though. :)

Tragic...But it was good all the same.

aw.. that's an adorable, but sad story. I had a feeling it was her! his sister! right? lol... i hope im right otherwise i must sound stupid! also awesome name!