Lust really isn't touched on as much as it should be in poetry. I think because the inclination is to be too graphic in describing the. . .culmination of lust. You've shown that it's not absolutely necessary to write about sweaty hard sex to get the point across.

whoa. amazing. there are definitely not enough poems about lust out there, which is weird considering it's such a previlent emotion in people. certainly more common than love, ey?

mmm, lust. i dunno chica, i know i dont mind giving into lust now and then...muahahaha...ehem.
a very good poem, first and fore most i loved the idea, very original, very intriguing and mysterious. muchly enjoyed, kudos!

very nice descriptions and rhyming

Beautiful!

Ohh, another brilliant poem, Mia! I love the idea of love vs. lust.

Such a vivid piece. Vivid and moving seems to describe all your poems. This is yet another wonderful addition to the already awesome list. great stuff... keep writing, mia!