That's so sad. And scary. And good. And I hope you don't feel like this!

This is an amazing poem. It's sad, and brings us back to reality shockingly fast. I've heard so many stories about this, know a couple of people too. It's a sad thing, and your way with words makes it as real as it really as. Also, Thanks for your reviews on both of my poems. I was having a crappy day and you really cheered me up.

I love the last line.

i didnt understand it but i still love you

Don't think I'm weird or anything, but I love self-harm poems. The emotion always shines through them, getting the reader involved and that's what I think all poetry should do. This poem is great. I love it. I'm adding it to my fave. stories list!

i dont know what else to say besides: COOL!

omg... that was deep... it was a real eye-opener!

OO;
Wow.
Powerful. Dark. Dank. True. Horror. Life. Love-less. Lonly.
.: The Truth :.
Tis the signiture of the true heart.
Beautiful, Danny. Truly Beautiful.
I'll be waiting for the next!
-TC

Wonderful rhythm, excellent imagery. I'm not one to be fond of this topic (I feel it is overdone) but I think you did a good job accurately and beautifully portraying it.