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I love the diversity in this song! The soft voices excelent job def. goes on my fav. list. {I am tired tonight but I will finish reviewing tommorrow I promise but your list of surely great works goes on and on so tired z Finish tommorrow or should I say later today}Good morning Sunshine! Sry I am a very random person at times! ;P ~Kaylee~

This is good, and I know you don't write all love songs, but still, there are a lot of them.

I love this one. It's great. It would be really great if with a piano a soft melody in the beginning and then it gets more deep or louder and faster.
-Jacqueline

Hey, this is good. I'm impressed, really. In fact, I'm gonna go read some more of your stuff... probably won't get to all of it today, but hey! I have no life and lots of time so I probably will eventually...

I can't really hear the tune in my head, but whatever it is, but I could imagine that it's extremely haunting and it stays with you for a while. I like the chorus and the song. It's about the fear that's always there no matter how deep down it is.. It was awesome, nicely written! XD

wow, that was awseome!

That was awesome. I'm one of those paranoid people, so I really loved it. Again, awesome job.

ooh. Nice! I like this one a lot. The idea of the shadow of a doubt. Mah-voulous!
~Hawke

i like this song too. I'm part of the "paranoid crowd", so it kinda spoke to me. good job.

I thank thee for reviewing Gaia Blade ^-^ I very much appreciate it!
And, this is very delicately nice. I think it is very much true, of being hurt by doubt of stuffers, but! =D Eheheh.
I'm...going to update Gaia Blade (again) by putting up the second chapter, the first was the prologue or whatever, so do check it out! =D I would appreciate it!

Yeah! At the beginning I was confused, but it was beautifully resolved, and the way you made your point was awesome... this is a great song, I'd love to hear it somewhere, it really needs recording. Great song. It makes a great point in a bit of a conversational style. It reminds me of this one song... oh, man, I wish I could remember... anyway, great song, I was really into it.

*stares* my god thats beautiful... i've got Amy Lee of evanescence singing this in my head and it sounds so wonderful! great job once again!

:) I like this very much. It's true. I was "picturing" a tune! Lol. Keep it up!
~*!Kate!*~

I think it reads quite well. I love how... I don't it give me and eeire shadowy feeling... like someone's watching me... crazy i'm not sure if that's something i like but i like how the poem seems to do that for me... anyway... LOL great song/poem you know... Keep Writing!
and thanks for the review btw you make me smile :-D