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| fadedrainbows 2005-02-07 ch 1,  | abuseGreat! The first unconstructed poem I've read of yours. You have nice talent in both rhyming and unrhymng poetry. You show great appreciation for poetry itself, and I can tell you will only get better with time. Keep it up! ~*~Faded~*~ |
| Eternal Light101 2004-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI abosolutely LOVE this poem. Got to say its one of your best. I just love the way it ended. I'm done. Thanks for Reviewing my poem (The Sinister Mind). Could you review Naked Before The Onslaught. I would love to see your thoughts on that. Thanks and keep up the wonderfull poems. Flames Out Eternal Light |
| Mrs. Loukopoulos 2004-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou should submit this in the Seaforth Newsletter next track and field season! Once again, you do a good job describing how the speaker feels while running, and this gives a postive feeling in the poem. It is a great accomplishment once the race is over. |
| hocsll 2004-06-21 ch 1, | abusewow, good poetical skills! haha, i was breathing so quickly at the end of the first stanza that i could had been the one running! the second stanza is short, sweet and powerful, and the last 2 stanzas describe the relief after running very well too :P |