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| awais 2006-07-21 ch 1,  | really smooth baby! :D |
| naughty-gal 2004-10-16 ch 1,  | hohoho!! shezo ok fine i admitt its not a romantic poem!! but its one of the best poems i have read on the site nice work dudette!! |
| youdon'tknowme91 2004-09-03 ch 1, | i thought it was REALLY beatiful :) ..hey, random question: can i know where you live? As in what country, i mean =P (if you'll ever get back to me, that is =p) ..was this poem between you and Him? (I'm Muslim too, but I'm saying Him as in God as in Allah but i guess it goes in general on other religion's gods too) Because that was how it felt to me.. and yup, i feel connected with your poem again, funnily =P Oh, and another thing; you read stuffs on Rumi too? I love his works! :P :D okay,i'm off ;) -nahjan |
| QueenVixta 2004-08-21 ch 1, | Great poem not much more I can say than that cos it was simply beautiful! |
| flowers in May 2004-07-30 ch 1, | wow, I realy like this, keep it up :) |
| The Jade Prince 2004-07-21 ch 1, | Truly beautiful; either you've read a lot of books or you know true love. Brava. --The Jade Prince |
| catseyeview 2004-07-17 ch 1, | very beautiful with wonderful imagery. |
| Punkerella 2004-07-16 ch 1, | Wow.That is beautiful =) Thankyou for the kind words. |
| Diva Chiba 2004-07-15 ch 1, | holy... very very well written! your use of metaphors is superb. well done!! ~Diva Chiba |
| Marina A 2004-07-14 ch 1, | I've already reviewed this, but I just felt like re-reviewing ;) There are a couple of lines that I really, really like...and those are: "My beloved is every question I ask, Every breath I breathe, Every step I take, Every sight I see!" AND "I awoke, drunk with intoxication and bliss. I must have dreamt of you." So...GREAT POEM, even if something so romantiky was not what i really expected from you :) love, Me! |
| Birdaloo 2004-07-07 ch 1, | nicley done! thanks for the reviews! this poem has really beautiful imagery! great job! keep up the spectacular work! ~Birdy |
| LovesTeardrop 2004-07-06 ch 1, | Aww that was very. Very nicely written with a good rhythm behind it. Wel done. Thank you for reviewing my poem also. LovesTeardrop |
| _kamikaze899_ 2004-07-06 ch 1, | wow cool! i'm not that into romance poems, but i really liked this! nice imagery, good job.. ^_^ btw, thnx for the review.. ^^ |
| Imaan-Z-gr8 2004-07-05 ch 1, | hey **... u must be really desperate to mail me like that but anyhoo... nice work moti... bohat interesting kaam you kia hai... did that sound right? its a lovey dovey fluffy mushy poem but i dont hate it! good work... c ya kiddo... au revoir! cheers mate! |
| hoellenwauwau 2004-07-05 ch 1, | Thanks for the review! ;) This is a great poem, liked it very much! Keep it up, cio, hoellenwauwau |