wow. that is gloomy and sad that ya killed my good mood! Just kidding. Oh I'll be sure to work on the petry cliches.

wow. Such a beautiful flow for a story-type of set up. Wonderful writing. =)
-Amber
ps: Thanks for all the reviews ^^ and Sprinkle Cakes are cursed! lol

Reading Garth Nix perhaps? Wonderful poem definately gave me a Ragqueen feel. Great images as always...Long Live the Queen.
MM

/Very/ well written. I enjoy the way you write, because it feels so easily done. As always, your rhymes are perfect and never forced, and the images brought up by the words you are using always leave the reader pondering over the poem. Interesting, and well done!

i like the last 2 lines especially. :)