Love the story, its great. the edning wasn't that bad. It was very interesting liked the characters.

I know what you mean about biting off more than you can chew. I promised not to write more stories yet I lied to myself. Anyway, that was great and I got this email about a writing contest and I'll forward it to you. It's for $10 k

I wonder what's wrong with A-Cat. Hm, update soon pleez!

very good story so far please continue very soon
Catch ya
~lauren~

yay! Aunt Jessica is awesome! hahaha. yes, so sorry if I haven't reviewed a lot, sometimes i get into moods where I don't feel like reviewing, so if I'm ever absent, it's because of that. :D but know that I like your story, it's great...it can't wait to see what happens next. and the stunt with the snake, so great! haha.
Aki

That was super good. I'm so glad A-Cat has a sister that doesn't think she's the best in the world! And thanx for the ''hairbrush'', pink is my fav color! yay!

Hi..I think this chapter had some FUNNAY dry humor on here...it was funnay. YOU BETTER UPDATE RIGHT NOW!(hear me out now, you're gonna listen to me like it or not RIIGHT NOW!)
Go child, go write like the wind!

hi! very good, as usual, even if it was just descriptions. she sure does have an interesting family *coughcough*. sort of like my dysfunctional family, but i'm not gonna get into that. u don't wanna know anyway. please update soon.

Hey this story has alot of potentiall. i do think you need to work of the spacing of your paragraphs (coz full blocks of words are intimidating...) But with a little work this could be really awesome!

heya. i'm sorry to say, but i couldn't get into your story. your summary was great which is what made me want to read it. but it was, kinda, well rushed. you launched into to many details from the word go. and i couldn't read on. maybe slow it down and pace it out? oh well, good one for trying and good luck. hope i didn't offend, just helped.

That was a really good chapter. I feel so bad for A-Cat

hey, it was good, but you could've done with a few more paragraphs. other than that, really good, update!

Thank you. *worships you* I love it so far! Keep updating! I love love love it.

Hiya, I LOVE this so far...are you gonna finish it? You need to 'cause it's really good. Some of the names in the story were what I was going to use for a story i'm about to write for your viewing pleasure, but i'll live. good story!

hey, you reviewed some of my stories, and so I thought I would return the favor. good story, i love Emilie's character. i don't like A-Cat though, she's really mean. that would suck to have her for a mother, although i guess that's pretty mean, isn't it? aw well, good story, will there be more?