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| hpfreakout 2004-12-26 ch 8,  | abuseLove the story, its great. the edning wasn't that bad. It was very interesting liked the characters. |
| FusionSpark12 2004-09-02 ch 8, anon. | abuseI know what you mean about biting off more than you can chew. I promised not to write more stories yet I lied to myself. Anyway, that was great and I got this email about a writing contest and I'll forward it to you. It's for $10 k |
| Luv2write4u13 2004-08-16 ch 7, | abuseI wonder what's wrong with A-Cat. Hm, update soon pleez! |
| lozzi1403 2004-08-05 ch 6, | abusevery good story so far please continue very soon Catch ya ~lauren~ |
| Akia Blakemore 2004-07-30 ch 6, | abuseyay! Aunt Jessica is awesome! hahaha. yes, so sorry if I haven't reviewed a lot, sometimes i get into moods where I don't feel like reviewing, so if I'm ever absent, it's because of that. :D but know that I like your story, it's great...it can't wait to see what happens next. and the stunt with the snake, so great! haha. Aki |
| Luv2write4u13 2004-07-28 ch 6, | abuseThat was super good. I'm so glad A-Cat has a sister that doesn't think she's the best in the world! And thanx for the ''hairbrush'', pink is my fav color! yay! |
| futuremrsdepp 2004-07-28 ch 5, | abuseHi..I think this chapter had some FUNNAY dry humor on here...it was funnay. YOU BETTER UPDATE RIGHT NOW!(hear me out now, you're gonna listen to me like it or not RIIGHT NOW!) Go child, go write like the wind! |
| XxDarkHeartxX 2004-07-27 ch 5, | abusehi! very good, as usual, even if it was just descriptions. she sure does have an interesting family *coughcough*. sort of like my dysfunctional family, but i'm not gonna get into that. u don't wanna know anyway. please update soon. |
| shyXshortieXbabe 2004-07-25 ch 4, | abuseHey this story has alot of potentiall. i do think you need to work of the spacing of your paragraphs (coz full blocks of words are intimidating...) But with a little work this could be really awesome! |
| popping bubble 2004-07-22 ch 1, | abuseheya. i'm sorry to say, but i couldn't get into your story. your summary was great which is what made me want to read it. but it was, kinda, well rushed. you launched into to many details from the word go. and i couldn't read on. maybe slow it down and pace it out? oh well, good one for trying and good luck. hope i didn't offend, just helped. |
| Luv2write4u13 2004-07-21 ch 4, | abuseThat was a really good chapter. I feel so bad for A-Cat |
| XxDarkHeartxX 2004-07-16 ch 4, | abusehey, it was good, but you could've done with a few more paragraphs. other than that, really good, update! |
| Ashlyn 2004-07-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseThank you. *worships you* I love it so far! Keep updating! I love love love it. |
| futuremrsdepp 2004-07-16 ch 3, | abuseHiya, I LOVE this so far...are you gonna finish it? You need to 'cause it's really good. Some of the names in the story were what I was going to use for a story i'm about to write for your viewing pleasure, but i'll live. good story! |
| XxDarkHeartxX 2004-07-09 ch 3, | abusehey, you reviewed some of my stories, and so I thought I would return the favor. good story, i love Emilie's character. i don't like A-Cat though, she's really mean. that would suck to have her for a mother, although i guess that's pretty mean, isn't it? aw well, good story, will there be more? |