Wow. That was... incredible. I was in tears by the end. Really, truly fantastic work. I loved the characterization that went into this.
Everything about it was amazing.
Meagan

This is amazing. Especially loved: No names, none at all - perfect. For this, it worked. I also liked how you would mention things that happened but not go into huge detail, leaving the reader to imagine it for him/herself - like here: "needed to call a truce by the fist with two smaller boys whose mother had the same idea".
But - you probably noticed this - it repeated. After "She left them there, leaning against her mother's body" it went back to somewhere in the middle and continued from there. I'm guessing computer weirdnesses...
But overall - this is absolutely amazing. You're brilliant.