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trash can art 2006-07-22 ch 2,	abuseNice flashback and reference to Atari. Funny stuff. You have three and mine broke a year after I received it, about a decade ago. I'm impressed.
trash can art 2006-07-22 ch 1,	abuseZahh! But walruses are the sexiest beings on the planet! This is blasphemy! (Oh, and to be truly cheap, I would've used Ivy.)
K. Francesco 2005-05-02 ch 2,	abuseOnce again, it was all average until that one moment. . .then SHEER BRILLIANCE. pets ego There, that is my latent contribution, so if you ever get your ** in gear again and decide to visit this site, YOU SHOULD WRITE SOMETHING. And if you decided that you're too good for this site. . .go to hell. Because now I'm getting my friends obsessed with your writing, even if they're not leaving reviews. See? See? And no, I'm not stalking you. I'm already stalking my S.O. Kat
K. Francesco 2005-05-02 ch 1,	abuse. . .it wasn't all that great. And then the walrus came in. Simply because of the walrus. . . I laughed. 'Nuff said.
Aimee Raven 2005-03-25 ch 1,	abuseHmm...quite sincerely I don't like it...though a while ago I did read your other stuff and I liked it...only, honestly, I don't approve of all those teenage angst authors out there, and when I don't like something I don't review it, you obviously have other methods but don't you think you're just going a little over the top...a lot of people may not like your stuff, but that doesn't mean they'll flame you just 'cause it pleases them to discourage people...blech...though you do have a point...ah...just wanted to be direct...in my case, I do like your works...except this one...
Cthulhu 2004-12-11 ch 2,	abuseHilarious, please update soon!
Neon Tetra 2004-09-16 ch 2,	abuseIt's like watching a car wreck, but in a good way. About the E.T. Atari game: the copies that were dumped in the landfill were also reportedly crushed under a steam roller and buried in cement, so your copy is probably one of the few that actually sold. (I'm the proud co-owner of a 2600, myself.) Anyway, I like the insane logic of these stories.
girl of death 14 2004-08-04 ch 2,	abusewhoa...this was disturbing and...odd. but still kinda amusing. ^.^ why am i laughing at this...?!? i should be yelling at you for being a disgrace to people everywhere like i usually do...but no...im too busy laughing and wondering why i cant write random crap and make it sound nice...nice. farewell! -me-
Queen of dawn 2004-07-27 ch 1,	abuseThough this is quite disturbing and not good for my health in any way it made me chuckle and enlightened my foul mood so congratulations.
The L1zard Queen 2004-07-16 ch 2,	abuseI think I liked the first chapter better. I liked the walrus. He pleased me. You should read this: http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1419420
Dirty Wallpaper 2004-07-04 ch 2,	abusedidnt really like this one...i think it was to drawn out, has potential. but yeah, not your best.
The L1zard Queen 2004-07-02 ch 1,	abuseIt made me chuckle in my head.
GingerKiss 2004-07-02 ch 1,	abuseOh you disturb me. You disturb me bacause you can write something distrubing that none the less makes me LAUGH. Then feel GUILTY for laughing at something so disturbing. hehehe. the whole animal violence thing is something i would normally flame you for but there is something god damn sinister about a walrus coming down the stairs...shivers I read the 2nd chapter. Now that was just interesting. I'd kinda like to hear more from these 2 characters but in the meantime I'm going to read your new story that you keep talking about
FireChainsaw 2004-06-30 ch 2, anon.	abuseRight now, Jimmy and Satan chapter 2 is about a third done. I could do it in a couple days if I rushed it, but I hate writing for a deadline. So I'm taking my time, trying not to force it. With any luck, the overall quality of the next chapter will reflect that.
CW-nerd-12 2004-06-30 ch 2,	abusehm... That was weird. I like your new bio. I've tried making some of my stuff funny, and I did, hopefully. A comic is also on my list of possible careers, right between trophy wife and cat lady. I just need to write something funny. I guess my funniest would be "the story of how my father finally got told," but people tell me "manny Michaels's little sister" is funny, in a very scarcastic, bitchy sory of way. Whatever. I'm being a review ** again. I like your second chapter. Maybe some more images and description of things'd be nice. When are you gonna update "Jimmy and Satan?" I'm in love with that.

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