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| Liviania 2007-10-15 ch 2, | abusePoor, poor Jimmy. It takes a lot of something to be able to take that. I'm not even going to question the scorpion lasers. Livi |
| Something Indecent 2007-10-14 ch 2, | abuseYeah you really should write some more chapters. I don't know where'd you go with it but that's not my concern. Just keep writing dude. Or terrible things will happen to you... P.S. I don't know why I like to write threatening things to you. Maybe I'm destined to murder you on the street one day. Anyway gotta go, good story,...be seeing you. |
| WyrdWolf 2007-10-04 ch 2, | abuseWow, this is an amazing ending(?) to this story. Emily with the scorpion lasers. Whoa. If I had scorpion lasers...well, I don't know. It would be interesting, to say the least. This was so packed full of awesome stuff it would just be wasteful to list everything I loved about it. Bottom line, it rocked and made me L.M.O.A. (yes, lmoa--it's my thing). Wolfie |
| Something Indecent 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was definately entertaining. Get done with the next chapter soon. If you don't...(oh I wish I knew where you lived so I could threaten you)...I'll explode with anticipation. Sure the whole event would be unique in itself but I wouldn't want to have to put my roommates through cleaning up my chunky gore and pulling out my bones that're embedded in the walls just because I wanted to read more of a story. Then again... |
| I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseWHOO! Awkward moment with satan. lol. |
| Bella-Rose 2007-08-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseDude, don't stop! This is funny as. You need a prist or a god representative in there, you know the whole good angel bad angel thing, this story's good. Why are there video games like that? |
| twilightwolf666 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was awsome. very um... hellish? I dont know, twas very funny though. Cnat wait for chapter two. |
| trash can art 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, though I have to point out that the new kids seem a bit typical. |
| The Watched 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuse'twas indeed rather amusing. Incredibly amusing. Heh. |
| Yellow Log 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI guess the little promise you made at the end of the chapter didn't mean anything did it? It funny along with your other work |
| Darket 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI'm waiting! This ** was too funny to just stop reading for. I love it! You're a funny writer, and I hope you put up more... Peace man |
| WyrdWolf 2006-04-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is plenty funny, as well as one hell of an intriguing story. Satan wants to bang the goth, steroetyped kids moving to South Carolina...this is gonna be awesome, I can tell. I can't wait to see some more. |
| Maldoror 2005-12-06 ch 1, | abuseSome of the dialogue felt out of place, and the narration was a bit stilted at times, but I still felt this story added a unique spin on an otherwise cliche' premise (Satan making casual interactions with the denizens of the human race) and did so rather well. It really held my attention. |
| The Goddess of Night 2005-05-30 ch 1, | abuseCool first chapter, it's original and funny (in my odd sort of humor way). Good family scene too, I can relate easily, and I like how the Devil is portrayed like a normal human being, very sly. *Great job* Keep it up I can't wait for more chapters. ~The Goddess of Night |
| K. Francesco 2005-05-05 ch 1, | abuseYes. YES. BEAUTIFUL. Definitely one of the funniest things I've read in quite a while. Oh, and out of the blue, if you like really good alt horror books of magic (in that they are god), check out House of Leaves, by Mark Z Danielewski. Weird, I always shamelessly plug other peoples works. . . Anyways, when you get out of your massive work/school scheduling, you should update this. I'd read it. Really, I would. Despite the fact that I already read one chapter and am now attempting to raise your ego levels to a previously unheard of degree. Kat |