you-know-who?
rofl.rofl.rofl xD
you make him sound like he's Voldemort!
rofl. ;)

i actually like dave...but i hope his ego goes down any time sooner...
he's so hard not to like :))
can't resist him

darn...i can't see the pic of lexia's dress

well, anyway...
you made me cry! =))
but that's not a bad thing, don't worry :)
i love the story...
i guess hot guys have hearts too :) (Mark in paricular)

i love this :)

i soo agree that the dream reveal a lot about her.
1. she thinks kim is better than her
2. kayla intimidates her very much
3. she likes dave but she doesn't want to admit it because she thinks that he'll only like girls like kim and kayla; she also thinks that if dave says he likes her, it would just be some kind of joke

anyways, i really love this..when i finish it..i hope it ends well :D

I can't believe I finished this in less than 24 hours! As for the story...

I loved every single part it. Even the beginning where you showed the pathetic side of Lexia, and the arrogant side of Dave...
Even though it was bittersweet, the ending really suited the story. Since it was bitter when it came to poor lonely Lexia:(.

You did make Lexia change, but in a realistic way. Lexia wasn't an average looking loner who suddenly becomes popular and pretty to everyone. She keeps true to herself. Even when Dave admits that he likes her, she does.

I loved how she was comfortable with herself(clothes, no make up, etc.). Actually, Dave never thought she was pretty. He liked her for HER...

The humor, ending, and characters, will cause me to remember this story more clearly than most stories that end overly sweet.

Since this is turning out to be a very lonng review, I'll cut my ramblings short to say: good luck with your writing in the future. I hope you publish this someday :)

Aww I love Dave and Lexia :)
Andrew is awesome too, i thought he was going to say that he likes Lexia or Kane.
I'm totally split between the two them. Which shall he choose? Will Lexia ever like Dave back?
Will all the answers be revealed?(Dun dun dunn... I have no idea why I did that.)
ANYWAYS... I love this story, it's really addicting. Seriously, I satrted last night and now it's... one day later. I'll probably fish it today! So yeah... your pretty much an awesome writer...
Keep at it! :D

The story touched my heart, it showed us to the true world, there is no happy ending, but never give up to seek for the best one. This story taught multiple lessons, ones that many people are going through. The author was trying to get multiple messages to us like the story said, don't give up. Don't lose hope just keep trying. But chose if it is really the wisest of choices.

no. make a sequel! no! rofll. plz? =]

:'(

OMG! Shane- Holden commodore SS range (2008) *gasps from hotness*
Dave- Mitsubishi lancer VI GSR (2003) range. *sighs in content*
i know im very delayed and this story was from awhile ago, but those two cars are stunnas my good friend xD
anyhuu, i like the story so far!

lool haha poor girl

this has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read here in fictionpress. it's really sad that Andrew has to die in the end, but I'm glad that lexia and David really changed at the end, and that they met each other again. (:
thanks for sharing this, I love the story, and you too! x)

I hope your happy...
you made me cry!
why did you kill off andrew?!
and why did she run away?!
i really enjoyed this story, your an amazing writer, i wish u would continue. But i know thatyour obviously bored of it.
or write a story about kim, i would read that!
x

Well thanks for the happy ending..LOL/
I liked it

Aww, i cried when Andrew died. I liked the ending a lot though because it wasn't happily ever after but it wasn't hopeless..it was the in-between ending. :)