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totally oblivious 2008-11-21 ch 30,	I’m not sure if there are any words to truly describe this masterpiece, hopefully there will come a day when I can take it of the shelf and read it in paper, where it really belongs.
Sabreal 2008-11-20 ch 1,	this introduction has certianly made me want to skip to the last chapter (which i'm prone to doing at times^^ what can i say? how can i resist?) however i'm prepared to read the story from beginning to end whith no skipping involved. this sounds god.
benozir 2008-11-15 ch 30,	i read thhis 30 cahp of this story in 2 days it was the best story ive ever read
jiali18 2008-11-13 ch 30,	I read this during the beginning of the summer and I seriously fell in love with this story! I reread it again recently and I decided to review it. :D This story is so original and i absolutely LOVED the romance between Dave and Lexia. It was adorable, and I think I would have really, really liked for them to be together. Strangely though, I accept the ending you have right now. I seriously bawled my eyes out but I think it's bittersweet in a good way. Like it's very ambiguous, so it allows the reader to imagine their own ending for Dave and Lexia. And for me, I imagine that Dave still loves Lexia. "He held me tight, as if he was scared that he would never see me again." GAWD, that was so genius! It provoked so much emotion! And the fact that you chose to end the story with "I'll see you later" is pretty genius too. For me, I think the reason I became so attached to this story is because Lexia's character developed sososo much. She was able to find herself in the end and get back on her feet, and dangit, it made me so proud of her. And Dave, too. Although it isn't obvious, I think Dave does change a lot just because he was able to love Lexia in the end. In the beginning, all he thought of her was this spineless girl, but by the end it was incredible to see how he changed. Thank you so much for not writing it as just another love story! Amazingly enough, it actually had depth! And you made this story not just another romance story but a story of a person being brave enough to change. that's pretty amazing. butcha anyway i just really, really wanted to tell you that I appreciated this story. It's one of my favorites on fiction press and even though it says that you're inactive on your profile, I still want to say that I would really, really like to see another story from you! :P
the bomb.com 2008-11-11 ch 23,	why did you change jaelyn to jadyn jaelyn is my name love the story
wowedbytickledblue 2008-11-06 ch 1,	me again. yea, i just wanted to say i totally no wat ya meant by aquaintances. me and my twin came up w/ that term when referring to our classmates and our so-called amigos (is that how u spell it? idk) AND i totally disliked teh ending. like wtf? i didn't get much depth about lexia either.wats teh point of romance if they didnt even get together?!! jeez, u need ta put this under "TRAGEDY"!
wowedbytickledblue 2008-11-06 ch 1,	wow... that was probably the deepest piece of writing i have ever read. u r a wonderful writer, dont stop.
iluvrains7 2008-11-04 ch 28,	what was the title of the song that jason sang?!
It's.Defiance. 2008-10-30 ch 30,	..wow, that was incredible. But I just don't get the ending. I'm guessing you just lost interest in writing this but it was absolutely horrendous..I mean, it was just a flop. Dead. She ran again. Closure? Hardly... I dunno, I felt it deserved a different ending. It still feels like there are so many loose ends. I really really disliked it, not because it was sad but because I think you could have done a lot better. Anyways, putting the tragic ending aside, the rest of it was ABSOLUTELY FREAKING AMAZING. Just W-O-W! You are an incredible writer - so much talent!! Thanks so much for sharing this with us :) Looking forward to reading more of your fics!
Logical and serene megadeat... 2008-10-26 ch 30,	Andrew's dead. I'm still crying right now. It was a very good story/novel/whatever you want to call it. I hope you have/will change your mind about that sequel. I want someone to end happily. And what happened to everyone else? I want to know.
Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 30,	this story is brilliant! absolutely brilliant! i know you said you don't wanna do a sequel, but it'd be GREAT if maybe, just maybe, you did a little short sequel. PLEASE?!?! :)
Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 28,	I'm so very sad gosh, i'm gonna be depressed for the rest of the week now. it's YOUR fault :(
Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 27,	I'm holding back tears as i'm typing this, and yes, i'm even snotting =[ i won't send a death threat, but i WILL have you know that i'm hihgly upset about this :( me no likey this sad stuff in the stuff :'(
Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 26,	ok, i am SO mad at Lexia right about now. how oculd she say NO!?!?!? I mean, yea, sure, dave was a butt to her in the beginning, but he told her it was becuase he didn't know how to act around her =[ i m offically depressed =[
Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 25,	aw, dave was acutally sweet in this chapter :D and i wish lexia owuld have said yes to the movies, but oh well. breast feeding for dummieS? lol, how classic. hehhe I remmeber seeing a "sex for DummieS" in barnes and nobles one day, lmbo. anyways this part, "I looked up and saw a girl I didn’t recognize. She was very pretty, but not in the intimidating way. You know how some girls’ beauty give off the I’m-pretty-so-don’t-mess-with-me vibe? Well, this girl had that beauty that gave off the I’m-pretty-but-I’m-really-friendly vibe. Sorry if that doesn’t make any sense." I understand that COMPLETELY. lol anyways, off to the next chappie

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