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| Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 30, | abusethis story is brilliant! absolutely brilliant! i know you said you don't wanna do a sequel, but it'd be GREAT if maybe, just maybe, you did a little short sequel. PLEASE?!?! :) |
| Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 28, | abuseI'm so very sad gosh, i'm gonna be depressed for the rest of the week now. it's YOUR fault :( |
| Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 27, | abuseI'm holding back tears as i'm typing this, and yes, i'm even snotting =[ i won't send a death threat, but i WILL have you know that i'm hihgly upset about this :( me no likey this sad stuff in the stuff :'( |
| Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 26, | abuseok, i am SO mad at Lexia right about now. how oculd she say NO!?!?!? I mean, yea, sure, dave was a butt to her in the beginning, but he told her it was becuase he didn't know how to act around her =[ i m offically depressed =[ |
| Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 25, | abuseaw, dave was acutally sweet in this chapter :D and i wish lexia owuld have said yes to the movies, but oh well. breast feeding for dummieS? lol, how classic. hehhe I remmeber seeing a "sex for DummieS" in barnes and nobles one day, lmbo. anyways this part, "I looked up and saw a girl I didn’t recognize. She was very pretty, but not in the intimidating way. You know how some girls’ beauty give off the I’m-pretty-so-don’t-mess-with-me vibe? Well, this girl had that beauty that gave off the I’m-pretty-but-I’m-really-friendly vibe. Sorry if that doesn’t make any sense." I understand that COMPLETELY. lol anyways, off to the next chappie |
| Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 24, | abuseWow. GREAT chp =] I'm sad that her and mark don't talk a lot like they used to any more though =[ |
| Booklover91 2008-10-14 ch 23, | abusei like cason =] and i LOVE andrew :D but dave...jeez...dave..no comment. lol |
| Aiko 2008-10-13 ch 30, anon. | abuseAUGH! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU MADE ME CRY! DON'T YOU KNOW I HAVE 8 O'CLOCK CLASS TOMMORROW?!?(Course you don't. I'm just fooling.) But that was addictive and amazing and you have a very unique and gripping writing style. Wish I could write like that. BTW, I cried and let me tell you, you have to have real talent to make me cry. That's a compliment in case you didn't catch that.; D Don't give up on the writing. It will be a real loss to the world if you gave that up completely. I mean it! Keep up the good work. |
| Booklover91 2008-10-13 ch 20, | abusehaha, that kssing part was oh so very funny. ahha, lexia slapped him. hahahahahha Ok, I'm done. Anyways, I'm so in love with this story and it's DEF. on my fav's list, sorry if I've said that b4, but oh well. anyways, I'm off to read more =] |
| Sweet Sassy Sarah 2008-10-13 ch 30, | abuseGee, this was amazing. I totally loved it. The last 3 chapters had me bawling like a baby. Congratulations on a well written piece of writing. This was amazing! Sarah |
| Sweet Sassy Sarah 2008-10-13 ch 27, | abuseI can't believe this. I don't really ever review complete stories, but I can't help it. I love this story, and I'm only 27 chapters in. Andrew is dying. I'm so sad I'm crying. You're doing an amazing job. |
| Booklover91 2008-10-12 ch 18, | abuseHmm, Cason, he called her beautiful :D And he sounds pretty hot...in a different way. hehe |
| Booklover91 2008-10-12 ch 10, | abuse“No,” I said. “He’s just really quiet. And people often mistake quiet people for snobs.” My mom tells me that ALL the time. I'm a very quiet person and she tlels me that my shyness and stuff can come off as being rude. lol Anyways, I've read some reviews for the last few chapters and I'm aware that this story is going to end sadly. I'm so upset =[, but i shall continue with my reading =] |
| Booklover91 2008-10-12 ch 8, | abuseSomething like that would happen to me, referring to her singing cuz she thought nobody was in the class. LOL AWW, Dave has a crush, crushy crushy crushy :] |
| Booklover91 2008-10-12 ch 7, anon. | abuseI KNEW she was gonna have to put on some scandolous clothes, i knew it! ah ha! And I can't wait to see what happens next =] |