This was pretty awesome. Oh Andrew. :( I think one of the best lines ever from this story was Kane's, about how sometimes not everyone knows how they feel, and if they did, the world would be a lot less of the mess it is. This story made me cry. I really liked the main character, and her likeness relative to real people. So full of flaws and so insecure, and yet sensible and full of feelings.

Great stories take you through an emotional rollercoaster, and this story did a good job of that.

Great story. Thanks for writing.

Love it! :)

That was so...PAINFULLY SAD! Do you know how many tissues I used in the last two or three chapters? A lot! Now my eyes are red and puffy. And my nose is still slightly drippy. I've learned to control my crying so that my sobbing won't make such painful noises. It's a good thing to learn when I read so many sad stories. You might be asking yourself why I am reading this after it's been completed for so long. Well, I was looking though an author's profile, one that's really good, and found this. Well, I defied to read it and here I am. I'd just like to say that... This was simply amazing. No, not simply, but with those big and complex flattering words amazing. Well, I need to get the stickiness of my tears off of my face, so bye!

a really brilliant piece of writing! I really likes the pace and the way it was addressed to ! The ending was bitter though and i was totally not expecting it though not dissappointing proving your talent as an author! But hey you caught me offguard there! I really am curious to know what happens to lexia and dave. And you left some loose end there like mark and his sister ,and the issues with kayla, and what happens to kane and all that! Are you planning a sequel or rewrite of the story maybe with a happier note? Do think about it and let us know! By the way did you think of publishing your work especially this?

Wonderful, even though it wasn't the ending I thought it was going to have. I'm glad you posted a conclusion, it made the ending much nicer. Although I'm sorry that you decided against a sequel. I hope you start writing again soon!

I was going to wait until I finished reading the story to review, but I just couldn't! Not after this chapter. I'm reading this on my dinner break at work and I'm trying not to burst into tears! It's just so well written and I congratulate you on that (even though I kinda hate you for killing Andrew off!) Well done on such a wonderfully written story

Really awesome story! Very funny, although i just had to cringe when Lexia was put into those awkward, embarrassing positions.

After reading that over two days i just have to say that it was absolutely brilliant. The way you narrated the story with Alexia addressing Mrs Anderson was very clever, it brought a lot of humour into the story (and I have to say, Alexia is absolutely hilarious)but was also descriptive enough for me to be drawn into events as if they were happenning at the time (if that makes any sense). At first I thought that the story was going to have a well rounded cliched happy ending which I have to admit, would have been enjoyable, but the change of tone in the story during the end, albeit being quite a shock, was an excellent and unique conclusion. I really do love all the characters, and despite many of your author's notes saying that people didn't like how timid Alexia was, I kind of found it charming and different to all those overly strong willed heroines that I'm just slightly sick of to be honest, although some of the things that she does are really cringe-worthy - like running away from Dave when she spilt the pie :)And I just loved the last line where he say 'see you later' which just gave the readers enough hope and the story an all-round happy ending.

Ok, I've finished with my super lame rant, and once again, this really was a wonderful story :)

An awesome first chapter! The leading lady seems very.. Quirky ] I can't wait to see how the story progresses - I'm glad she didn't just jump in the car straight away when lol 'the hot guy' came to her rescue - btw I love the detention scene I could picture the whole thing and just see the pen flippin in slow motion and landing on the teacher D

aw.. the ending was bittersweet...

i kinda hoped there was more.. especially on cason, lexia and dave's story.. but this ending was fine in itself..

it ended but it was open for a new beginning for lexia and dave..

all in all it was a great read!

great job!

thank god she's becoming a little less of a loser.. seriously, i was beginning to get annoyed with her weak pathetic self the more i read about her...

glad she's changing )

this story is so comical!you're a great writer cause i cant seem to write decent humorous stories.

i'm really loving this story!hahaha!:D

I can very well relate to her family. I'm closer to my mom than to my dad but not exactly best friends. My brother and I barely talk and I only go into his room for things I need. My little sister is the favorite, being 'perfect' and all around spoiled. I can be awkward at times like her but I don't consider myself a loser/loner :P Then there's Dave... I was falling for him in the first chapters. He semmed nice. Its good to read how a guy thinks though. His actions weren't obvious cause he obviously intended other things. He's a real jerk and cocky (which I am most of the time xD ). I've experienced guys who are nice but then reject me. I guess they've just got manners like Dave. I like how its just like a real guy instead of an obvious egotistic jerk. This story is by far the most realistic story I've read. I hope you don't mind, I made an ebook of it and put it on my nook to read on the go. Don't worry, I've put the author name and I'm not making a profit out of it. It's simply for my use and pleasure.

I thought it rather annoyig when she got off track a lot and how the sequenced are jumbled and how there isnt a lot of dialogue. Other than that i like this story