Why would you do that? I know I am a very very late reviewer! But... I just started to read fictionpress while I have been on ... Whatever it is... The story was sooo beautiful... I cried... sobbed! But why why did it have to end like that? Your story gave a realistic touch.. to show life doesnot always end perfectly! Just a compliment for an epic story... Just curious- is anything ever going to happen between Lexia and Dave?

I dont have a fictionpress account so I don't usually review story because the author isn't able to respond but I really wanted to review this chapter because I really like your story. I've read a lot of stories both on here and on fanfiction and I've never read a story written in this format. I love it! I decided that I will review this chapter because I feel like it is a vital chapter because of the change she is going through. I wont lie I also wanted to know who the creepy person in the park was and what the reason for Andrew's move was :P (IDK if you reveal these later in the story but I really want to know). Great story, you have a talent for writing!
xoxo,
S

im gunna be completely honest..I HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE THAT YOU KILLED ANDREW. I ALSO HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE THAT ALEXIA AND DAVE DIDNT GET TOGETHER. And i promise you that i am telling the complete and utter truth when i say i cried so damn much to the point where my eyes were swollen when i read this..i had to take the laptop up to my room and read it becuase i couldnt stop crying! This is the first ever story that ive cried to and fell kinda bad cos i swore ide never cry whilst reading a book..guess thats not true huh?! Anyway even though i HATE the ending!...your a pretty amazing author...but it sucks to say that i wont..CANT..cant read anymore of your stores incase they have a sad ending too and i WONT cry again! Anyway great story..one of my favourite (and saddest) that ive read on FP :)

I didnt expect this ending, but it hurt. I mean it really really hurt... Lexia reminds me of myself, when my cousin died. I was never so soft spoken, or innocent and sweet... But all the other things she is, like smart, a bit weird, a reader and sometimes, very closed off from the world... Those are things I relate to and Im sure, many readers can as well. Its sort of like the whole point of the story was to imitate life, in its surprises and unintended cruelty. Im not much for the cliches, and when I read the third chapter I seriously debated putting this story down, but I couldnt and im glad i didnt. Thank you for posting this story, thinking it up and breathing life to your characters, because i just know it had to have hurt you as much as it did your readers to lose one... Its what makes writing special, I guess. Im almost afraid to find a sequel, but Im going to look through your profile, because I am hoping you have made other works, since i really liked this one. :]

Ok first of all I want say I loved ur story but there are a few things left out,which I think u should have whether lexia started liking Dave in a serious way I mean,did her relationship change a little bit with her family after andrew's death,Cason meeting her in the cemetery didn't go anywhere either I just couldn't understand where u wanted her story to go,I mean she became strong wid time but was still alone n looked sad..I know u wont but I still wish n hope u write a sequel or one shot where things are given a better I want thank u for the story.
Yours truly,
Not a critique Just another reader:)

Damn it, you said the ending would be happy. Why, Andrew, whyyy? Did he even get to tell Kane his feelings? I love your story, but those bittersweet endings always get to me. That bit with Dave at the end was just beautiful by the way.

It's not really that we don't care about what you say, it's that we don't care about reading answers to reviews that we don't take a glance at :) Nice story so far. That Cason guy totally reminds me of Reno from FF VII for some reason.

This story is amazing. The ending was totally not what I had expected, and I didn't believe you when you said the story was finished. The story was so realistic- I noticed quite a few traits from Lexia that related to me. You're an fabulous writer and I hope that I could write as well as you do in the future.

Oh my gosh, I'm reading this on my phone and as soon as I recognized the lyrics of the song, I turned on the iPod and started playing it XDD This chapter is amazing, it legitimately made me cry. Major props! I love it!

This girl has pretty serious body issues if she spent the first four paras whining to her TEACHER about her lack of curves. I recommend therapy. ;)

When I saw "Dave's Interlude" I thought-since they were in the same class, wouldn't it have been cool if Dave's parts were HIS assignment, coincidentally writing about the same thing? Anyways, I'm only on the first couple of chapters and I'm already hooked! I can't wait to finish it!

It was the most beautiful story I've ever read. The way you wrote it made me want more each chapter. I just couldn't stop ya know? Then when I got to the ending, it wasn't what I was expecting. Let's face it guys, I'm used to happy endings and the They lived happily ever after blah blah. It truly did move me and that doesn't happen like, EVER.

that was the most twisted cliche ever. I was so not expecting that. In the beginning, I skipped a lot of Dave's POV solely because it was reiterating what already occurred... but since then I think you used less filler. I'm glad. It was a gripping story with an okay ending that put me to piece. Merci.

This is an awesome story :( I'm so sad that you left it like this. I hope in the future you will see to come back and write again.

You you you...I can't find any words. I can't believe you killed off andrew. Seriousely not cool. But I still think you did a good job with the book. after all an authors job is to captivate ppl and you did just that. It's...not bad that you didn't finish finish the book but it leaves our imagination to work it all out. all in all I liked it even if the andrew thing pises me off