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Reviews For: The Bog

emilyclaire
2004-12-27
ch 4,
abuseI really enjoyed reading these first few chapters. I understand the pressures of demanding readers, so I'll only say that I would enjoy reading mroe chapters as often as you can procure them. Your story reads smoothly and with entertainment. Hope to see more soon.-ec-
arachibutyrophobia
2004-12-17
ch 3,
abusehey marina its me, the girl in Mintz's 3D class. u should update this, just sit down and let the words spill out to get some ideas no atter how stupid they are...it helps overcome writers block, cuz u can always go back and pretty it up a bit. good luck!
aldy
2004-08-14
ch 1, anon.
abusehey kiddo, keep practicing, you are getting better, and don't listen to a lots of critique, most of us don't know what we are doing. Some more writing will give you the style, and couple of years in the future will give you more content to write about, good luck keep it up.
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